one destination
straight curious meander
we wonder and wait
This is the last of my existing pictures which immediately prompted a haiku. The exercise has had an interesting result: now I’m looking for the picture and the haiku at the same time. I’ve not yet had time to indulge that.
Since I got into this I’ve read a bit more about haiku; it seems there are all sorts of combinations which are considered to be ‘haiku’ – even a single word.
That doesn’t do for me. I like the discipline of trying to marshal my thoughts into the 17 syllable, 5-7-5, formation. Though I was glad to learn about the use of space as a kind of punctuation – as above.
Perhaps liking the discipline comes from learning, as a journalist, to make a ‘story’ fit into pretty much an exact number of words, or a similar discipline as an advertising copy writer – in general with far fewer words to play with.
In just the same way, I like to marshal my photographic thoughts with the discipline of using film. However, I’m quite happy to use the ‘indiscipline’ of digital photography for other projects, and I’m looking forward to having the creative inspiration to compose many more words in a single piece of imaginative writing – if it ever happens. But I won’t tag it as haiku.
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July 16, 2012 at 7:17 pm
A limerick (although it has some slight variations) is a pretty strict form. Of course the best ones, not only follow the rhyme and rhythm forms strictly but use wordplay and other techniques for humor. I’m seriously addicted to limericks though I do enjoy reading and writing haiku too.
July 16, 2012 at 8:09 am
Good haiku. And I agree with you. I prefer to be strict about haiku 5/7/5 syllables.
July 16, 2012 at 9:07 am
Thanks again Madeleine. The limerick appeals to me for a similar reason, though some of the very long final lines can be funny if done well, but I think I’ll stick with the usual for a first try.
July 12, 2012 at 11:39 am
This is so lovely working together, your haiku and photo, just love this!
I think this will be my meditation for today, thank you for sharing!
Have a wonderful day!
Marie
July 12, 2012 at 1:53 pm
Thank you so much Marie. This one was the one I found most difficult to complete and had many tries at the middle line over several days. Then I discovered the ‘space’ and suddenly it resolved itself.